by Sean Renaud
Another piece of shit story. In real life they would be in jail getting it in the ass as always.
This "story" is some completely worthless on so many levels, that it's difficult to know where to start.
-- KK in Texas
The author resents successful people - and since he cannot compete - he imagines unprovoked violence as his right
Any sequel will have the leading characters doing thirty to life the hard way - much of the hard being big black cocks stuck up the ass every night THAT would be justice
This story seems to have been written from the angle of hatred. Hatred's not very erotic. Part of the appeal of the Nonconsent category is how the characters may be secretly enticed by the sex - the sex depicted here is very degrading. It's just rape.
The characters are very high school sitcom stereotypical (I was, and am, a scary black-wearing pierced-face student, but I'm not some pissy, uneducated drinking/drugging asshole). There's nobody to root for in this story - the underdogs are jerks too.
Why doesn't Shade play with the strung up boy toy more? I mean being one of the guys doesn't mean she has to be gay does it?
that was fucking hot! too bad the preppy football player wasn't beaten some more, he would have deserved it :D
This was not even kinky it was fucking disturbing get some help you goth fucking weirdo
Nice to see the Goths get to cum for a change. So many straights try claiming they straight, yet are absolute freaks
You people read the story to the end just to deny your hard-on's. It's a story, not real life. GET A GRIP!