All Comments on 'Fucking Under the Caribbean Sun'

I loved the buildup that went on during the week that ended with the mom and son fucking! A second chapter would be great now that they are fucking. I have a feeling that the resort manager and her son are also screwing around. Maybe a foursome in the future? Five stars and a favorite point!

Very good hope there is a second chapter!!!

Definitely need another chapter

He needs to pour his cum into her and leave her with a honeymoon baby bump

A terrific buildup to them consummating their love and passion that night. The buildup was teasing and sensual. I know that other readers of your work will probably ask for and even demand a second or even third chapter.

I believe that Mimi and Sanchez are lovers also, just a strong suspicion on my part.

5 stars and an all around great story full of passion and sexual tension.

hot sexy and romantic

Love the buildup. Good story telling.

FANTASTICALLY WRITTEN. A FIVE STAR EDITION THAT NEEDS CONTINUATION. PLEASE CONSIDER A SECOND CHAPTER TO YOUR LOVE STORY. THANKS AND GOD LUCK WITH YOUR FUTURE LOVE STORIES BETWEEN MOTHER AND SON

Where is grand mother. Great start

Beautiful progression of closeness and acceptance of the others arousal. "God mom why didn't...?" was so tender and indication of latent desires. My mother was the first to ask that question.

5 stars. a very well written erotic story. I hope there's a chapter 2. a couple more days in the suns, then home and see what happens. i think all your stories are terrific- and this may be one of your best!!!

Holy shit, I need a drink to put the flames out!

Sexy story!

I absolutely loved thIs story. I would love for you to write another chapter please.

The others have said it all.

We would like more chapters!!n great story!!!

Let Mimi tell them all rooms have CCTV. That her and her son are also lovers

Yes, so lusciously erotic. Loved it. Love how you drew them together in a sensual and erotic love making session and let the primal cat out. And of course, looking forward to your next works.

Get past the start. What are you talking about? What happened with grandma.

Is this part 2 of a story and you forgot to enlighten us?

Sorry, I've read this exact story before. Is it plagiarized or resubmitted?

I thoroughly enjoyed the pace and the descriptive language. I always enjoy your writing and so I vote yes for another installment. I trust you to know what direction to take your characters. I will be waiting, thanks for sharing.

To make a short story long . . . . .

In my top ten, thank you.

Please continue this story. I really enjoyed it

That was a fine piece of writing. I loved the entire build up to the final push over the line. I thought that they would discover that Mimi and her son were lovers and that would help them to decide.

What are you doing, writing romance novels? Why did you take so long before the action? I lost interest after pages and skipped tho the end to leave this comment.

Loved the story. Great build up and follow through.

I found the story to be an easy read and I can see how it can be continued.

Perhaps Mimi and her son reveal a similar path.

Perhaps a late night party with Mimi and her son in the Honeymoon suite.

If you write a continuing chapter I really hope to read it soon.

I think Mimi and her son are doing the same thing and they know William and Rachel are mother and son and not married wonder if they all will have a orgy. I do hope to see more

Definitely need more chapters to this story. I was getting a little frustrated with the slow build up, but I'm a guy. I do see the purpose to the build up and accept it. I don't need pregnancy or Grandma involved. Maybe our couple watching Mimi and her son to sort of validate the beauty of their incestuous relationship. Give them awhile together to build their relationship before moving to an orgy. Thanks for a great erotic love story.

I echo the sentiments of others here. You just can’t leave us to guess what comes next. We all see so much more.

Please please please!!!

Devoted readers,

Brokenlance13 and horsegallicker

If there are mothers who read this abd want to exchange fantasies add me on Kik. My username is Buuoo1. Im a young guy between 18 and 30. Would be fun to talk

I will even drink you mommy...

Want to watch me & my mom? Come to 'xhamster' and serch for the user name "jding"... She made me swallow once, mouth full of my mommy.. yum. Enjoy

I like it and I'm looking forward to maybe a chapter 2?? In the meantime I'm off to check out more of your work..

Well told tale taking time to build to a delightful conclusion. One question remaining will there be more?

more please ch.02 ???!!!

Beautifully told while taking time to build to a delightful conclusion. Some questions remain. Will there be more? Will they become a husband and wife and are children a part of their future?

We need more!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!

Let’s hear about the forbidden fruit of this Union.

I'd love to read more about how their relationship blossoms. You've also made me curious about Mimi and Sanchez, could it be......?

Vacations!

We definitely need more to this story

Wow - i really enjoyed that. An entertaining story, masterfully told. Great anticipatory build, rewarded by super hot sex. Looking forward to reading more of your work :-). / Ed.

Very good story my cock was hard all most of the time.

Dear "Mary Anderson",

Another lovely and Great Story, as usual!

It needs a Chapter 02 for sure, maybe exploring the joys of anal love between mom and son (both seems to like it) and also a 3some with Mimi too....

For Chapter 03 when they back home, how about the seduction of the Grandmother in a sweet loving 3 generations family love!

Thank you for another sweet, romantic and Erotic story!

And thank you for some sweet moments of true Pleasure I got just reading yours lovely stories, mmm

Aunt Helena

Portugal

This reminds me a little of “Spring Break Wife”, which is another really good story.

Great story Mother and Son incest is always best. And that is the only way, no extra people needed, well maybe dad if he's dead. nice read thanks

I'd very much love to read a second (or third,? fourth? fifth?) chapter about these characters- both at home and on other holidays.

Loved the slow sexy buildup and explosive end

5 stars from me for this beautiful as well as hot incest story! But I'd like to read some further more, mabe even more taboo and scandalous behavior at the holiday resort and even at home. How'd you like that?

Hope your fucked you good even knocked you up too.

Excellent slow burn, and the way the boundaries crumbled was well done. Loved it!

Great by the numbers build-up to ignition. A fitting entry to new carnal delights. Wow!

wait...this story basically screams for a sequel...?? hows there none?

Mimi and Sanchez/ there was a hint of them also being a couple or am I imagining?

uh...him fucking her without a condom and coming in her..when she until then only used condoms. some story with the grandma/the extended family etc.

Great, great buildup and then just such a sudden ending...

honestly would be a shame to let this story just die/end like that.

That was one HOT STORY. Great build up...so sexxy.

I am going straight to the shower😉

Thanks😘

Great read so sexy. Needs at least another chapter.

Great story.no mention of birth control!!

also maybe a four some with the resort manager & her son.

A further chapter would be nice.

Wow what an arousing story!

All I can say is WOW! Very well written and we both came twice reading it together! Thanks for the cums!

Thank you for this beautiful love story.

Yes, I think a second chapter would be perfect, and yes, I agree with anonymous that you start with Mimi and her son.

XYX

You write superbly. I have saved you as a favorite because your mother/son stories are some of the best and this

I so admire your writing. Terrific stories, story telling, and punctuation, spelling and grammar. I only spotted one error in this entire, totally arousing tale.

What a great build of tension to copulation and climax. Very eell written. Part two should lead to the discovery that the manager and her son are also lovers. NO swapping but shared interests.

What a great story. I was put off toward the end though when she said they both would have other lovers. I was hoping they would stay solely together. But still a good ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Storyline

Pure unadulterated sexual bliss, absolutely sucking fucking wonderful. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

Possible foursome? Two hot moms,two hot sons. plenty of potential.

Wow 5 Stars. Lots of future potential.

Now that was perfect. The best love should be when a son makes loves to his mother. This should be what all mothers strive for. A son who worships them, just being their mother. Husband's come and go, but a son should always be there. We need to stop the BS of condemning incest. A mother who feels a son releasing into them has come ( no pun intended), full circle of life.

(11/15/2021) Well, this was entertaining but I found it hard to follow at times. The dialog came in short spurts like some sort of shorthand. The story seemed to move too quickly at times leaving too many gaps to be filled in by the reader. I felt that their relationship before them crossing their Rubicon was glossed over, sort of taken for granted. My favorite scene was their romantic picnic at the secluded lake. IMO that should have been the point they realized they had become lovers. I gave this story 4 stars.

Wonderful story.. Thank you.5🌟

Stunningly good. Might there be lots more to cum????

I believe the story should continue till the mother get pregnated and give birth for his son because they both love each other

Awesome story you should continue with more!!!!!!!!!!!!

Incredible story, so well written. Skillfully building to it’s climax. You and I made love and fucked together

Through your words. Very well done.❤️

I enjoyed this, watching it build too a climax. You have a very good sense of pace. I would not at all object to seeing this story continue.

Well done.

Wonderful story. Waiting to see if you continue it. It needs a second part.

What does the future hold?

MORE. Damn, that was a climax. Great story.

FUCK, That was HOT! This story needs more!

This story needs more ended on a cliffhanger

The buildup and teasing were amazing and I enjoyed this work a lot.

I oved the way you described their first sex encounter. The same with me ad my third wife! Keep it going, PLEASE!!!

I loved it wish it was continued its got a great story to tell and it to make us all happy reading your stories

Congratulations you did a Yeoman's job when you can have everyone clamoring for more. I'm envious your writing is masterful. If it gets to the point that you decide to continue this line I think with your talent I would be more than happy to help you with more kudos.

Intrigue was lacking.

It was obvious from the middle of the first page what was going to happen.

Of course, we knew what was coming (or cumming ? )

That 's the reason we read these stories ! This one is a tad long and so slowly progressive, but it's so much the better.

Thanks for the nice writing. 5 Stars. Chuck.

Nicely paced, well done!

You write extremely good stories. It's easy to see by the way you write that you are very intelligent and have a way with words. And, as a!ways, intelligence will always be the ultimate aphrodisiac!

Slow developing but hot as fuck

It needs a part 2 but leave anyone else out its a romantic incest story so it needs to stay between the mom and son only

Yo! Mary great story!

Wow!!

What a very exciting and well written story!

I love how long the build up took. It's sorta like music. The rythymn is great, then the trumpets come blaring in during the climax!

This was a page turner for sure, and very satisfying. Your descriptions were succulent and sexy enough to really put the reader into the scene.

A second chapter would be nice, but this one stands alone on it's own nicely enough. I van easily picture the son going out and buying more clothes to dress his pretty mother up in as they fall deeper and deeper in love.

I know I would if I was him!

Thank you for a wonderful composition!

Score 5 stars.

Sincerely,

B4PW.

I am writing via Google Translator.

I also read this story through a Google translator.He doesn't translate badly, although I might have missed some points...

I finished reading this story at the moment when they found themselves in the cave...That's what I want to say about this story.The idea is great, but the story is not sexy.Where are the details?So there's nothing special about him putting his hands on her chest?Did they do this every time before they came to this resort?Where is the description of their feelings from this action?And how exactly did he put his hands, why is it not described?...They undressed for the first time on the beach, she was lying on her stomach and she clearly doesn't have a fat ass that hides everything.Where are their feelings from this moment?He TOUCHED his sexy and beautiful mother's naked ass for the FIRST time in his life and saw her pussy!He kneaded it and watched it in the light of day.Spread, crumpled!And she knew about it.But the author pretends that there is nothing special about this, as if it is a frigid person or as if this event is a daily routine for them.How can this story be of interest to a reader who visits such sites?It's not sexy.The absurdity.

Would love to hear the next Chapter. Fab hot story.

What about a foursome with Mimi and her Son?

Brilliant!!! Thanks

What a smokin’ hot story, Ms. Mary Anderson !! Although I’ve never had a fantasy about fucking my mother if she had been as uninhibited and sexually charged as you I likely would’ve done so. There is almost nothing as arousing as the aroma of a sexually aroused woman and your story brings that reality to the fore. Please continue to write explicitly described stories connecting the pleasure sharing a woman’s scent as part of the story .