All Comments on 'Full Circle Ch. 03: Finding Help'

Great instalment. Thought there might be more of a delay before they had sex as you spun the story out but suppose you have the storyline all set up. 5⛤

Elaine, an over analyzer easily distracted — a conundrum. The simmering tension/drama established in the first chapter lingers and now a new, intriguing character added to the mix. A hallmark of your writing, I believe, are the richly textured, 3-dimensional characters, main and supporting, you create for us. The sex scenes between Elaine and Sly so erotically charged, easily visualized, yet revealing of characters and a budding relationship — yeah, I’m a near hopeless romantic … .

After finishing this chapter I found out that Mistress Elaine is an old char of yours and I need to congratulate you to your style. It got so much better over the years.