by Evil Alpaca
Loved this installment, probably more than the first two! Keep it up!
This could easily hold it's own in any forum... you have talent and a wonderful imaginative style of writing... hope you don't keep your fans waiting too long for the next chapter... you are making us care what happens to Red and Jane and Mindy and Arthur.. way to go
Great chapter - I'm starting to really like the ensemble cast of this story (while for DMW I only really got into 4 of the main characters) - Jane, Red, Anya, Talia, Arthur, Robbie, Tarloh, etc. I'm wondering if this could be heading to a Sampson-style haircut related thing though...
They read so fast it doesn't seem like they are four lit pages long. And when I reach the end, I'm looking for more. Great story.
Ok, this is a 'wanking story' and a good one too.. But I kind'a miss the 'telling the tale' part.. And you are so good when offering a tale..Ah well, there seem to be a lot of people getting of on this one though, so who am I to complain :) Yoron
"The two men carried their female companion into one of the abandoned subway cars before stripping her" and then they cleaned and disinfected the seats before touching them while naked. OK, I added that part, to make the story not icky.
I wonder if Red's tongue has that sand-papery texture whilst in bipedal kill-kitty form and if Jane would enjoy that.
Hi I love this story but I did find a small typo
it says
" Jane turned beat red"
Normally this would be beet red after beetroot which is deep red in color...