All Comments on 'Full Moon Strays Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
great writing!

I love your stories. Thank you.

IntelligoIntelligoabout 18 years ago
Great work!

Loved this installment, probably more than the first two! Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
outstanding

This could easily hold it's own in any forum... you have talent and a wonderful imaginative style of writing... hope you don't keep your fans waiting too long for the next chapter... you are making us care what happens to Red and Jane and Mindy and Arthur.. way to go

WindWraithWindWraithabout 18 years ago
Sampson?

Great chapter - I'm starting to really like the ensemble cast of this story (while for DMW I only really got into 4 of the main characters) - Jane, Red, Anya, Talia, Arthur, Robbie, Tarloh, etc. I'm wondering if this could be heading to a Sampson-style haircut related thing though...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Wonderful

They read so fast it doesn't seem like they are four lit pages long. And when I reach the end, I'm looking for more. Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
ok

Ok, this is a 'wanking story' and a good one too.. But I kind'a miss the 'telling the tale' part.. And you are so good when offering a tale..Ah well, there seem to be a lot of people getting of on this one though, so who am I to complain :) Yoron

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeabout 5 years ago

"The two men carried their female companion into one of the abandoned subway cars before stripping her" and then they cleaned and disinfected the seats before touching them while naked. OK, I added that part, to make the story not icky.

SensualSigmaSensualSigmaalmost 5 years ago
Red

I wonder if Red's tongue has that sand-papery texture whilst in bipedal kill-kitty form and if Jane would enjoy that.

bhojobhojoover 3 years ago

Hi I love this story but I did find a small typo

it says

" Jane turned beat red"

Normally this would be beet red after beetroot which is deep red in color...

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