All Comments on 'Full Moon Strays Ch. 06'

this series is really really growing on me! your ideas are so well thought out! i'm surprised at how in depth all your storylines are. you even have explainations for the diff sci-fi things you incorporate! great job. i am impressed.

I love the characters, and the plotline.

I especially like how you show that being super-human doesn't make a person any less human.

Well done.

I have to say, I love where this story is going (as seems the norm, with your stuff). With the Bed of Rose's and DMW references I half expect Lost in Texas or Twenty Years to Life to crop up in there somewhere, although I guess Dark Eden is probably in the wrong area of town for the Strays ;)

So I finished reading chapters 3 through 5 from Lost in Texas today, and ended up reading through the 6 chapters of this story today. I don't think there has been one moment where I have not had a smile on my face.

The characters are great. The emotion is real. The plot is ever so grasping. You are an outstanding writer. Keep it up and I look forward to the next chapter.

i have enjoyed every minute of your story... you make me care about Jane and Red... hurry

I really do appreciate how many of your stories feature cameos or mentions of characters from other stories you've written. It's an extra little piece of candy for those of us who're fans.

The whole "heaven's eye" thing had me irritated for a minute, like he was stealing something. Eventually I remembered that it was from old Phat & Phluffy's own story. :-)

Still wondering why Red was whipping her eyes. She should have wiped them, less chance of going blind.

5 stars again

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Another few minor errata

"but I don't want to sleep so close to wear we've buried our friends. => wear should be where

According the keepers of order => According to the

Could it be that something had really finally went their way? =>went should be gone