All Comments on 'Full Moon Strays Ch. 07'

Good job on the latest chapter :) Just so you know, there were a few grammatical errors that I caught while reading through. Oh... and there are no male succubi, per se. The males of the species are called incubi (and I have a BAD feeling I spelled that wrong).

Damn, whoda thunk it? ;)

I much enjoyed this chapter. That scene with the harpy was very hot.

I'm getting jaded, aren't I?

Nicely done, Evil. Looking forward to more.

I KNOW WE ARE PUTTING PRESSURE ON YOU, BUT I HATE TO COME TO THE END OF THE LATEST INSTALLMENT ON THIS ONE. I AM ALSO JEALOUS OF ANYONE WHO HAS NOT YET READ IT FOR GETTING TO READ ALL THE PREVIOUS CHAPTERS AT ONCE... LOL. KEEP IT UP EVIL, IT SIMMERS... SHIMMERS... AND ROCKS!!!

Succubus and Incubus are supposed to be the female and male forms of a sex demon. The succubus form takes advantage of a sleeping man to take his semen during an Then in the incubus form injecting it into a sleeping woman while she is having an erotic dream?/nightmare?

But there has to be dozens of variations on this theme just in Western literature. Probably hundreds more if you collected all the global legends.

5 stars !

My comments

Jane's magical locks seemed to have and idea. => an not and

For every one gingerly lick =>here lick is used as a noun but gingerly is an adverb.so 'to gingerly lick' is fine but ' a gingerly lick' is not.

But Robbie seemed to have to qualms about teasing both her opening with his slick tongue

while the air was latched onto her ass. => opening should be opneings and i guess air should be hand ?

He pressed his back against her, noticing almost off handedly the texture of her wings as he came in her ass. => shouldn't this be he pressed against her back

He felt the warm wait of a woman's body against his chest => wait should be weight