All Comments on 'Fun at the Club'

One word! Fantastic!

I must thank you for your wonderful stories. I just found them this weekend and finished reading them all. You have a gift for keeping your reader wanting more and more and more. My wife is the beneficiary of what you do to me (big smile). Your newest fan.

What a story, I am sitting here wacking my dick while I read your story. It made me hard just reading

I'm definately aroused as parts of the story were very well written and described.

But honestly, I could have done without the last paragraph. The rushed single paragraph with 6 more orgasms wasn't really necessary and kind of took something away from it for me (I am a girl...). But I think you have good ideas and good potential. Look for run on sentances to improve the writing overall, but keep writing with those awesome scenarios!

It was good, but a little rushed at the end. Nice read though! Just look out for grammar issues and such, they can really be distracting.

I will love to be Tom and fucking a pussy full of cum after a huge cock that's been inside her