All Comments on 'Fun with Film'

. . . for the photographer/model storyline. I find it terribly erotic. Nice twist at the end, too.

I loved the story. Got myself all worked up for you sweety! Well done, write the next chapter, please.

How could she be so naive? She just fucked a stranger and clearly wanted it but as soon as she finds out that he taped the whole thing then it's, "oh this is so wrong". Whatever.

from starting to feel sexy to sex - too quick with little set up

Could be so much better with a rewrite

I always love to read a story from a female writer, gets me so worke dup , please write more i would love to read more