All Comments on 'Gabby and Alan'

What a great story JENA does it again. everyone should find such true love like this. DJ

You've done it again Jena. Another great story is all I can say. I've already used up all my superlatives. Keep 'em coming luv. And I'll do my best to do likewise.

WELL DONE JENA,A TRULY EXCELLENT LOVE STORY.IAN

it is good, but it should have been put to "Erotic Couplings" section to have some degree of surprise... reminds me of the other story about a photo shoot with the same mistake made.

and it had been better if it has been more "descriptive..."

keep on writing.

It was good, but it just didn't.. flow too well. You just seemed to be giving statement after statement. Then again, maybe it's just me. Keep up the good work!

Brother/Sister love stories are my favorites and this one was a really good one. Thanks Jena.

that i've read - and wish you were still writing for this site. i gave it 5 stars - although the dialogue is clearly not your best. but a nice fun sexy story!!