by Blulady
Loved it! Good beginning for a story...can't wait to find out what happens next.
This is a great story and your writing was wonderful, I felt like a voyeur. I enjoyed this so much and hope there is more to come. Please don't leave me hanging!! Thanks for a great read.
I would love to have Gabriel as a teacher. This story is what erotica is all about. I want to read all of your stories.
I can't wait for Gabriel's next lesson. Please don't leave us hanging too long. I didn't give it a 100% only because I am not really into anal sex. Above all, a great story; you are a good writer.
you have to, you just have to write more to this story! I loved it from beginning to end!
Your story made me want to come so bad, you wicked man. I loved it the way you built up the tension and the pressure. I'm not always that into anal...but god...you just set the mood and pace perfectly.