All Comments on 'Galactic Slave Ch. 03'

I noticed the modification and fleshing out of several of the sceniaros in Mr. Norman's "Imaginative Sex" statring with the 'Outwitted Female Execuative" and the 'Slave Shop".

i really hope Trilotozene can be modified to help me with my auto-immune disorder, perhaps then i could stop having immune suppresent chemo.

i like the way this story is developing into another excellent Dweaver yarn.