All Comments on 'Games Daddy Plays'

"I can hear belts, zippers and shoes falling to the floor as they undress."

Love this.Anticipation, Arousal, Well paced.

Have you ever even read a story by a real writer?

cute little stroke tale

This cute, quick little story was wonderful! Added a wonderful amount of arousal and suspense to the idea. As such, this idea could obviously be built into a series of you so desired. Your writing is developed, leading to this snippet creating a want for more. Nevertheless, I enjoyed it and will enjoy it each time I return to it. Thank you