All Comments on 'Gammenthaler's Monster Pt. 01'

fantastic

Those four introductory paragraphs really put me off reading the story in a rather hilarious way with their slurping butts and candles reminding the character of his burning ass.

Really exciting! I liked it a lot, and cannot wait to see what will happen in the next chapter!

This is a great start and promises to be hot in so many ways. I can’t wait to see more.

Nice story. Very well written. Couldn't wait for more.

Hoping you continue this one soon! It’s very well written, and incredibly hot so far! (_o_) m4

A brilliant introduction. When you make time, I hope you add to the story.

So far a very good story, though incomplete. Would be great if you added chapters.