by LiamChristopher
Cute story, but a real bummer ending---Basically you want someone to write part 2. That sucks.
Exquisite, 5*. Very well done. Really hoping you will write Chapter 2. Thank-you.
What? This is your story and it was going so well. Don’t cop out. Finish it.
Very well done until the last line. You’ve got it if you’ll just write. Here’s hoping you do.
Hhmmm, yep, sure nuf, I'd bet on it. She got zapped by the Martian-ray, slutgun. They had some work for her back home.