All Comments on 'Gamora'

by LiamChristopher

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goodshoes2goodshoes2over 2 years ago

Cute story, but a real bummer ending---Basically you want someone to write part 2. That sucks.

alexetlaurealexetlaureover 2 years ago

It's a really nice story ...hoping for a chap 2 .... 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Exquisite, 5*. Very well done. Really hoping you will write Chapter 2. Thank-you.

BarryJames1952BarryJames1952over 2 years ago

What? This is your story and it was going so well. Don’t cop out. Finish it.

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireover 2 years ago

Very well done until the last line. You’ve got it if you’ll just write. Here’s hoping you do.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Hhmmm, yep, sure nuf, I'd bet on it. She got zapped by the Martian-ray, slutgun. They had some work for her back home.

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Writer of many fantasies and short stories. Not sure of a place for these so I decided to add them to Literotica. I do not write quick seductions or jump right to it stories. I attempt to develop characters and plots. Hopefully you will enjoy some of the things that I have pub...