by ShadowLuver
Wow 🤩 Amazing story! Great description, and really hot sex. I can picture everything, and I want to be Crystal’s neighbor, lucky guys
First rate work; excellent story! Well written, natural dialogue and plot development, and very hot sex. Perfect combination of fun and erotica. Five stars.
Loved this story, it’s characters, writing style, quality and plot. This author is one of my favorites!
Great exploration of Crystal's emotional and psychological progression from discovering her accidental exposure to full-on exhibitionism and hedonism; the story flows wonderfully in a natural and very erotic way. A+ job on this, thanks for writing.
Schwing! Sexy, realistic in an erotica universe, and excellent writing. Great build up and imagery, please write more.
Excellent piece of erotica. The writing was just about perfect, with good grammar and no errors, which made for great readability. Anyone who knows the plural of areola has made a good start! Finally, the characters were likeable and believable and everyone had fun, not to mention great sex.
This is a wonderful story, with a nice mix of Crystal's thoughts, self-discovery, and emotions with hot sex. Even though it was clear where it was going and what was going to happen from the author's notes and story tags, the story moved along naturally and with enough imagery, details, and specifics to keep it fresh and sexy to the end. Well done!
Sexy, fun, and just enough details to keep it hot! Great writing, technically, and creatively, wow.
Hot, sexy, well done and great writing 😛. I’m definitely checking out your other stories!
Aroused; check (so wet). Entertained; check (fun and engaging). Captivated; check (couldn't stop reading). I loved being able to vicariously live one of my favorite fantasies (taking two men in me simultaneously) via Crystal! Numm, I loved this story!
First rate story, very sexy and engaging. One of the best I've read here. Thanks for writing!
This is one of the best stories I have read on this sight. Too bad it was fiction.
Great buildup, sex, and imagery. I love to let guys “accidentally” see down my top or under my skirt; I wish I were so brave as Crystal and could really let myself go like that!
Fantastic story on every level! Can’t wait to read more from you and will definitely check out your other works.
I've fantasized about being taken by two men at once, and this got me wet and thinking it might just be something to try irl. You are one of my favorite writers here, thanks!