All Comments on 'Gayle Massages Me'

I like the way you include all the foreplay, not just sticking it in and fucking.

I don't think this reads like smut... this is erotica pure and simple... smut is where they go at it imediately and the pace is so quick that the sex if it were real would have only lasted five minutes in the real world... this is erotica it is set at a nice pace, which in a perfect world all real sex would be like... some (not all) writers on here think that the sex is wam bam thank you ma'am... still I restate that this is erotica... thank you for writing this and tanalizing us with your words....

This tale of foreplay is a delight. No charater development, but who needs it. No charater development, but who needs it in this type of story

After all of that I would still have spread her ass cheeks wide and sniffed and tongue fucked and sucked the taste right out of her asshole.