by PreacherPorn
Wow, keep it going it’s been such a fun read and I’m waiting for the next chapter.
this was the best addition to this series you made yet the date is 2-19-20 so this opinion is dated in case the next chapter blows this one out of the water looking forward to next chapter and you did very well in the growth of your characters and how he handles his harem
uWu waiting for tmr please continue read ur other story about the mind control please continue that one as well very enjoyable ik it takes time so I don't mind waiting I'll wait if it's good and well.... Its fuckn great
I like your story but you really need an editor. That said don't stop.
Thanks for toning down the humiliation of his sister and the degrading of the twins, it makes it a better story in my opinion. I'm also glad you decided against Gio making everyone pregnant. I'm looking forward to the next part.
One of my favorite literotica Story involving big dick;-)
I'm really hooked up and looking forward to the next chapter.
P. S-I know you are posting these chapters at regular intervals but still I would request you not to discontinue this series now or in near future.:-)
Hey Loves,
Chapter four should be out on 2/22/20 according to the powers that be.
Enjoyed this so far, left me wanting to see how Chris and Brock end up.
this was written by a kid who wants to pretend to be a "man". He has so little, if any, experience with real females that he actually believes the childish stupidity he types (NOT writes). Look at the name he uses. An obvious attempt to sully the reputation of someone he knows is far better than he'll ever be, as a true man, and not foul.
GROW UP.
I am enjoying this. I am also glad as was mentioned previously that you toned it down a little, especially regarding his sister. I look forward to reading more
rubbish pure rubbish, you know nothing about sex, no guy is able to cum gallons of cum 6 times a day and no woman is going to become a sex slave just because he has a 13 and 3/4 inch cock, in the 1st place a lot of women would run the other way not wanting to get their pussy ripped and ruined for the average size guy, no guy wants a big loose pussy that he can't even touch the sides of her pussy, get real, 7 inches thick? you could put your whole arm up a pussy that wide. then you have him treat his sister like shit after she helps him out and he turns into a real bastard and thinks he is gods gift to women who should obey him, and then has the girls tell their dad he fucked them, no dad is going to stand for that shit, I wasted my time reading this far, one star and that was too much. you must be 12 yrs old to believe this shit
What is wrong with you people that you don’t understand is fiction and embellishment is part of it? It’s a freaking fictional story stop taking things so literally…… “OMG no one can cum gallons” No shit but like I said it’s a story a fictional story….. #facepalm
Liked those stories so far!
Fantasy is so nice: Geek who had let everyone walk upon him all his life, change into some ultra-dominant (hate the alpha male bs) hunk in less than 24-hours. I love fantasy!
Don't read the silly comments.
First of all, it's fiction, fantasy.
Second, at least the author doesn't write that the hymen is five inches deep in the cunt.
Third, everyone feels like they're cumming gallons of sperm when there's only a spoonful of it. Subjective sensations. You can cum even without semen.
Fourth, everyone's potency is different. Some people, one fuck and go to bed. And some set records. So in the early 2000s, in Thailand, one of the champion kickboxers had sex almost 87 times (one with a dog) - this one is not verified.
The highest number of sexual acts in a day was at the porn actor John Do, who satisfied 55 women in a day. There is information that the record was broken in 2017 in Singapore - 57 female brothel workers. Among the fair sex, the record was set by his colleague Lisa Sparks - on her account 919 (!) satisfied clients during the day. The record was set in 2004. Up to that time, since 1999, an orgy lover by the name Hauston who satisfied 620 men in 10 hours was in the lead in the doubtful category. It would seem that she could go no further. But history is known fact "achievements" daughter of Roman Emperor Augustus Julius: in his life she had slept with 80,000 men. For her lecherous behavior, the libertine was exiled to the island of Pandateria, far away from civilization.
The researchers interviewed 1,170 adult men and women of various ages and concluded that between the ages of 18 and 29, the average number of sexual acts per year was 112 per year, between 30 and 39, 86, and between 40 and 49, 69 times per year.
1 to 2 teaspoons of sperm is secreted during ejaculation.
The average man secretes 32 liters of sperm in a lifetime.
7 Kcal is contained in one teaspoon of semen.
45 km/h is the average speed of ejaculation.
10 cm is the length of the sperm's path to the egg. "Lives" pass it in 2.5 seconds.
From 10 to 17.5 cm - the length of the male penis, from 7.5 to 17.25 cm - the length of the circumference of this organ.
2.5 cm is the size of the smallest male penis.
35 cm is the size of the longest male penis.
11 erections during the day and 9 erections at night occur on average in men per day.
From 2 minutes to 2 weeks is the time it takes for a second erection.
2 hours a week, 5 days a year, and 6.5 months over a lifetime make love between a man and a woman.
15 min. average intercourse lasts,10-12 min. foreplay lasts,3-5 min. - intercourse, 30 sec. - orgasm.
Ages 17-25 are the peak of male sexuality, 27-35 years - the peak of female sexuality.
67% of couples constantly practice traditional sex, 30% - oral, 3% - anal.
From 4-5 mm to 1 cm - total clitoral length, from 2 to 20 mm - clitoral diameter.
40% of girls experience vaginal and 60% experience clitoral orgasm.
30% of women experience orgasm rarely or never.
20% of women have an orgasm every time they have intercourse.
95% of men end each intercourse with ejaculation.
*****
My honeymoon record was 36 times in one day, my wife cumming over 50. In 20 years, every day except red days, 5-6 a day. Even pregnancy isn't a hindrance. Sex at 6:00am and delivery at 9:50am.
It's all individual.
People just need to relax and take this story as the fun romp it is meant to be. Of course it’s over the top. I think that might be part of the point. Don’t take everything you read as fact lol
Good job; thanks for sharing your work! I don't understand all of the complaints are about. You told what kind of story this was going to be.
In addition to all that smut crap just spewed, taking one road then suddenly backing up, is proof that this writer is just making crap up as he goes along.
Also, don't make me laugh about 2 black belts. In our country, where these "martial arts" are simply schools, we gain our ranks by beating up the best fighters from other schools. No belts. No degrees. Hell, even Wesley Snipes knows that his belts are nothing to actual fighting.
Western POV on fighting is so hilarious.
Glad you backed off on the mass pregnancy and turned him into a more caring master for his slaves.
Some of the readers might be surprised by someone with real martial arts training. My 5 ft 4 inch 125 pound wife has put three 6 ft plus male attackers in the dirt over the years. WIthout a mark on her. Though she did get her clothes dirty one time. One lost two front teeth, one went to the hospital (the cops congratulated her. He and his partner had been robbing women around town) and the third was a bully who made the mistake of grabbing and choking her from behind. I subdued a much larger attacker without injury to either of us though dislocating one of his arms or smashing his head into the pavement would have been easy. And left another attacker unconscious. He actually threatened my life then attacked.
Remember, the author is talking about high school football jocks. Not other trained martial artists. The guys my wife and I took out all thought they were tough guys and good fighters. I know the one I put out had training, Obviously bullies and muggers think they are tough.
Having him modify his position on the pregnancies makes him more real. Good choice. Not a big fan of incest, but at least there are other girls involved.
Your just AMAZING. I love this whole scenario. I put myself in the sisters spot and know I would be exactly like her. I don’t know where the story goes from here but I am imagining myself as his closest lover and protector. This has me getting wet over and over as I read it. I get up and realize I’m wet again. It’s so HOT. I’m reading everything your wrote and hoping you have more. Kisses from your horny follower.
Awesome, looks like he's actually a decent guy after all. When he turned full asshole in the last chapter, I was like, "oh what a shame, this could have been great". Now we're back on track :) With great power, comes great responsibility.