All Comments on 'Geek's BIG Break Ch. 04'

I love the story. Please keep it going! Just ignore the assholes that want to complain about “realism”.

Saw the posting at the end of chapter 3. Saying that chapter 4 was to come out today. So looked up your bio page and there it was. Just amazing on how this story is progressing. Now I'm looking forward to chapter 5 so please keep up the good work.

very good chapter I am completely drawn into this story and the characters I really want to see how this goes

Al I can say is to steal a line from a very famous song," with a tebel yell, I cried more,, more more!

Love the story. Keep it going!!!

Keep writing your fiction! It IS entertaining. Not sure why people would keep reading these if they thought they were so unrealistic! lol.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

I hate when women are shared in these stories. I hope you don't let the twins father fuck them or anyone else.

Keep calm and ignore the people without imagination...yes it's fantasy you the author have stated repeatedly I have liked it from the start keep it going as long as you can I'm loving the story line

While it definitely pushes the boundaries of reality, you sell it! Everything that you describe (and you describe it excellently, I must add) can be explained within the story. There are still some errors which you should fix, but the story holds together.

Yeah, it's over-the-top; yeah, it's unbelievable; yeah, it's 'impossible'. That's what makes it so GREAT! This is a fantasy world, what's with those idiots that cry, 'unrealistic'. THIS IS FANTASY, GET A FUCKING CLUE, WOULD YA!!! Oh, and PreacherPorn? Keep up the excellent fantasy story thing you got going, here. I am SO excited to see what happens next! Throbbing with anticipation, here!

I just read the last 3 chapters. they were great. Totally enjoyed them. Keep them coming,

plenty of room to grow

You are doing at fine job, it's EROTIC FICTION, who cares about negative comments? I just hope he stays hydrated😁.

great stuff man its just out there enough that its captivating and keeps us wanting more. cant wait for whats next

Love where this is going.

Looking forward to reading more

Keep them coming, yes it's out there but I think that's part of the enjoyment of it as it's a break from reality.

This just gets better and better with every chapter the potential to explode into so much is amazing keep it up

I really look forward to more chapters of Gio and his girls . As others have said this is a fantasy world. You are it's creator.... Let the story take you when it will.... This chapter was fantastic, especially the after fight scenes.

What a fun read. Keep it going. And your vengeance series also. Fun stories love them.

Loving the story. Has anyone else noticed the P.E teacher is Biff Tanner?? lol :p

At the first of the story when Gio is fighting the Jocks it mentioned Gio had a fighting style like one of those Used Car Windsock Puppets,and I damn near lost my supper I laughed my fucking ass off so hard.I mean seriously those things are both obnoxious and dangerous,one time I was driving along and one dealership had one too close to the road and the thing came down right in front of me and got hung on the front of my car and I literally ripped that sucker in half with my car and tore that bitch to shreads before I slammed on brakes before I crashed,it went up over my windshield.

People ran out of the dealership and saw the mangled Windsock Puppet in rags and they tried to pay me $300 as compensation but being the honorable guy I am I asked if I could keep the windsock puppet and the fan (since both were basically ruined) I took them home,found some similar material,and a new plug for the fan and fixed them almost good as new,and sold it to a buddy of mine for $100 since he collected stuff like that,and he still has it to this day on his property annoying the neighbors with it day and night.

So I say those things are just a menace but they are effective to piss many people off if you cross paths with one.Okay this story is just a riot,keep it up.

I'm enjoying this chapters alot. Please continue to write them

When he did the assistant principal that was really hot. I hope put Gio in a situation where he finds other women who "think" they have control and then after see Gio's huge cock they become little sluts begging for it. I would like to see these women offer a little more resistance until they feel his cock inside of them.e7ranw

Gio needs to take the twins his mom and the dad in an all out dominating orgy

We got to have more !!!!!!!!!

This is absolutely one of the best stories I've read on literotica. Keep up the good work, and please don't let the haters get you down. I love the fantasy aspect and the growing relationship between Gio and Greg. The father Gio never had. Again, thanks for the fantastic story. I can't wait for to see what happens next!!!!

Reality is one thing, but this is just completely idiotic. Reads like it was written by a 13 year old.

I have throughly enjoy reading these stories. I do hope that you continue this...

I can't wait for the rest...

Keep Writing. Enjoyed Reading The Series. Please Continue...

Keep up the great story line. MStillany variables from here: Still bang some of the faculty in orgy. 2 Seek more revenge on coach and jocks on a tape some how FXdTSr

it is a delight to read your stories. hope the next part comes soon.

Great story hope you keep writing, and don’t let the naysayers get to you they don’t have to keep reading.

Keep it coming!

Great story !! one of the best I've ever read! love everything about it except for one thing...why authors are always deciding to bring in other guys, it takes away from it a little bit like what other guy (unless he swings that way not judging) wants to be with a girl after she was fucking and sucking another dude ? It's weird to me lol but at the end of the day it's your story and I'm not judging keep doing you and like I said everything else was great

Never mind just checked out your bio that's why you're adding the dad😂😂 lol just kidding lol you keep doin you brotha💯 probably not gon read anymore of it cuz that's not my cup of tea but like I said everything else I read was great.

Any word on when the next part will be released

please contine the story

These stories are hot. Ignore the haters and keep it going please.

whens the next chapter?

He is a genus. Truely the smarticlest of us all

Love your content, Preacher, but your grammar could use a bit of tweaking. With a little proofreading this would be perfect. Want a volunteer?

great fuck the detractors in their necks fantasy is good

yet he can shove it into a virgin butt with no preparation? This kid must really suffer from "penis envy" where he must be significantly blow average; maybe he is larger than we think ( 4 - 41/2 inches)?

Every time I read where one of these kids has a character with such a large penis, I think the typist must suffer from "penis envy" and figure the kid must use a multiplier of 3 to 4 of his own size. So much for fooling the reader.

love it. do suggest you read it again though as she took her panties off and put in her mouth and next sentence he ripped them off and put them in her mouth. Still fantastic story she must have worn 2 pair???

If you can't take the criticism, don't publish your crap. If you are, don't be a whiny ass bitch and cry about it.

Let me first say, this series is brilliant! I’m not an expert nor an author on LIT. I’ve experienced a good many years on this planet and I’m an avid reader. I also grew up as a skinny, bullied nerd. I love every aspect of the chapters in this series. They’re moving into my Favorite stories folder. Thank you for sharing your creative genius with us!

A lot of people are constantly talking shit about these stories but almost all of this person's stories have the hot tag

How to lose potential readers: add too many fetishes or fetishes that tend to contradict.

Example: Write about a supposed dominant alpha, but have the character share his lovers. Sharing lovers is what non-dominant males do to curry favor from other males.

Bonus: Each additional fetish reduces your potential audience, it does not increase it. Thus, having bro/sis, mother/son, and father/daughter does not give you a larger potential audience, but a smaller one.

Perfect.

Greg Anderson met his daughters at home in the evening. They tried to seduce him and admitted that Gio had let them. Greg took them back to the girls' room and called Gio asking him to come over right away. When he arrived Greg explained to Gio that he had given the girls to him. Completely. They belonged only to him. As a responsible man, he could not share them. The girls are either his completely or he can go suck his own dick. That's the last tako talk. Also, don't bite more than you can swallow. Your women are your responsibility, don't take more than you can satisfy, provide and protect. Relationships are a two-way street.

Perfect.

Greg Anderson met his daughters at home in the evening. They tried to seduce him and admitted that Gio had let them. Greg took them back to the girls' room and called Gio asking him to come over right away. When he arrived Greg explained to Gio that he had given the girls to him. Completely. They belonged only to him. As a responsible man, he could not share them. The girls are either his completely or he can go suck his own dick. That's the last tako talk. Also, don't bite more than you can swallow. Your women are your responsibility, don't take more than you can satisfy, provide and protect. Relationships are a two-way street. But there's only one traffic controller. Then there will be no chaos. There can only be one head in the family. In a harem, one sultan. In the Pride, one Alpha.

I almost quit reading the story due to a lot of asshole behavior of the main character last chapter. I know this is over the top sex comedy, but the violence, verbal or emotional, makes my skin crawl. Thanks for lightening up. You really have developed these characters. Good job

In an earlier chapter you had stated that Gio's endowment was about 7 1/2 " around.

At the beginning of this chapter it was stated that it is 3 1/2 " across. That equals nearly 11" around. 7.5 around is actually 2.38" across(pretty hefty)!

Formula (C= pi times D) or (D= C/pi).

Goddamn, Daddy Anderson was so fucking badass!

Good job; thanks for sharing your work! I can't stop laughing.

Good story but Holy terrible editing

Yup. Confirmed. Not even a montage of the moves used in the so-called fight. If you want to write about a character with 2 black belts in "martial arts", do your goddamn research. Take a goddamn "class".

Black belter? Cape fwapper, more like it.

Sorry you had to explain about the big cock. A lot of the critics are complete idiots. They ought to try looking things up. Great fantasy. Keep going and don't let the illegitimate assholes get you down.

PREACHERPORN

Love this story especially the over the Topness of it. I still cannot get over all the anonymous criticism, when what your criticizing is someone's imagination.

How is this any different than a book like "Lord of the Rings", "Harry Potter" or a movie like "Star Wars". And no I have never read any of those books, I just think that the comparison makes sense.

This story has been so much fun to read and considering your incredibly warped sense of humour I am not surprised because at least we have that in common. Great job with this five star story that I believe will be a classic.

Having the twins fuck their father...wtf??? Why would they want to fuck their own father and why would Gio want to be a cuckhold? You can be into being cucked but it's not for me.

Your amazing… I am totally enthralled. And I must say my panties have a gooey sheen on them again. Hope we can be friends. I’d love to know if you have other stories I can read. Love 💕

The twins wanting to fuck their father, could have done without that. But as for the rest, juicy content. Curious as to what they're holding over Abi. I wonder if that whole cheerleader-jocks unofficial policy shit actually happens anywhere. The sad thing is that I can actually believe shit like that happens, which is kind of depressing when you think about it.

This story is so much fun and such a good time. I love the characters are all working off their base instincts of fuck and fight.

PLEASE get an editor. The terrible grammar and incorrect word choices (genus instead of genius was hilariously bad) keep taking me out of what's otherwise an interesting story.

One of my favorites wish you'd make more of this story

Actually I think the largest penises were never measured. I once saw a photo in a book of several black men with penises all over 18 inches. Don't know what tribe they were. Obviously whoever took the photo was impressed.