by Creamer
Creamer:
Well done story - appreciated by this geek. There were a few typos and the Mercedes became a Caddy part way through Ch.2.
But, overall, I enjoyed it.
Thanks.
Almost felt sorry for her at the end - almost!
Thank you yet again, oh boy, im defo coming back for 04.
I was with you all teh way to this point. That was to much and too cruel. I think you can write and write good, but not so cruel. I won't be reading further into this series.
Enough is enough. The revenge is great but I can't comment any more. Still gets five stars but "Revenge of the Nerds" is done.
The end of chapter 3. calling the pimp and telling him you tipped the girl five hundred. Priceless!