All Comments on 'Genie Chronicles Ch. 04'

This is ONE HOT story line you got here. I clicked on the second part by accident and boy was i glad i did. Great!!

I was browsing through the new section of the stories when I cam across chapter four. Now, I'm one who usualy reads the the beginning to the end, but to be honest I didn't really have the time for anythign more than a quick skirt flipper. Well, and trust me - I'm grinning here, I was late for work thanks to this chapter as I simply couldn't let it go. After work I cam home and have read them all now from beginning to end.

I have always been a serious fan of Genie/Jinn/Djinn stories of all types, and this is reafirming the erotic nature. My boyfriend also loves it, but I think he get's the interest from the costume I was wearing on halloween.. that however.. is a different story. Anyway, I hope this story goes on forever and more. Congratulations, you've got a fan.

Alexis R.

I have read every chapter so far, and they seem to get better each time. Keep up the good work.

I love the series. Keep it up. I hope we get to learn Genie's name soon. =D

This is a great story line, I love the touch about the non-audible talking, very imaginative. Along with the toteboards and the way you describe all the facial expressions. Please keep up the good work!

~CB

A great series that gets more and more crative and imaginative. Thanks.

Joe,

Another wonderful installment. I related to both characters this time. They are very realistic to me. Keep up the good work.

SmMale

Great stuff. Just wish the chaoters were a bit longer

I only wish that I could give you a higher score than a five. I think 10 would be more fitting.

I loved the ghostly hand/blow job.

WELL I'VE BEEN READING STORIES ON THIS SITE FOR SEVERAL YEARS(SINCE 2001) THIS IS THE FIRST STORY I'VE BOOKMARKED.IT IS A GREAT STORY WITH A WONDERFULLY TENDER PLOT.

PART OF IT ALSO HAS TO DO WITH THE DEMEANOR OF THE GENIE.IF YOU HAD TOLD THE GENIE TO EVEN SHOW OFF TO OTHER MEN TO ME AT LEAST THE STORY WOULD HAVE LOST AT LEAST 50% OF ITS SOUL IMMEDIATELY.THANKS FOR AVOIDING THAT TRAP.

ps THIS IS THE FIRST STORY WITH A BLOWJOB WHERE I'VE GIVEN 5 STARS

Getting a BJ in the dressing room by an invisible chick... that's hot!

What's also hot is the continued development between both characters... I like that. I noticed that most if not all of the top writers here at Literotica focus on developing

character at the right pace and at the right time.

You do so perfectly as Jack and Genie's backgrounds are slowly revealed yet naturally and not conflictingly with the story. Good work.

What I found weird was the tote board Genie and Jack created for the women. Maybe it's just me but I got the thought of a video game or a math class during this sequence. Not in my taste, but at least it's something quite new.

Keep up.

Love your ideas...

One of those tote board vision things? People the world over would pay quite well for that. Me? I'd use it to make some girls VERY happy.

A ghost blow job that's a new one, truly a great Idea !!!

nice story so far.

tote board good idea but the underage thing?? creepy...

It's just for added detail, Literotica guidelines forbid characters under 18 being in sexual situations