All Comments on 'Genie Valentine'

Clever way to find the ring : )

Sweet balance of love & lust ... what everybody wishes for on Valentine's Day.

A perfect venue for Laresa!

The ring gets to some deserving people, everybody haves fun, including the genie. Why not?

Good luck in the contest,

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Very well balanced and imaginative tale, crafted and honed very skillfully. Impressive. Good luck in the contest!

I think this was an awesome story of unselfish love. It shows thinking for others more than yourself can be good for you also.

Everyone gets some fun, and some good comes of it as well. Nicely done.

a loving couple, a torrid threesome and MST3K. Who could ask for anything more? Good luck in the contest.

Thank you. This story could be my family. I have a son with autism. The healing of Garion brought tears. My wife is somewhat sickly and overweight and Lee putting his wifes needs before his own made this the perfect story. Then a great, very well described sex scene...perfect.

I'll be pulling out the quarters at every ring machine I pass.

A nice way to find the ring. Very modern and very fun. You have such great ideas with Laresa, this was just another of many. Wonderful read. ~ Red

heart Dark. In mine, I wish all your wishes to come true. This was a beautiful Laresa story. Good luck in the contest.

What a sweet and lovely story. Well done. Good luck!

More a valentine story with a messege of hope, but still able to get me aroused. Please do more stories like this.

It's a great addition to the Laresa universe...touching and erotic! A very good read!

I love the Laresa stories... this is a really touching addition to the chain, and a moving entry, Dark. A departure for you, I think, and I'm impressed.

a very nice addition to the Laresa stories!

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I also have a son with autism. I can remember wishing for a cure when he was a toddler. I never thought to wish for that kind of genie, though.

this is the first of the laresa series that I've read and it won't be the last. A wonderful tale, Dark. Very well done.

As a caregiver for my Bride of 23 years this story has added a twist to a simple dream.

thank you

Wow. just... wow. THis is more than likely the most unique Genie-based story i have ever read, and damn is it a great read in it's own right. 5/5 easy.

Loved the story.

A beautiful story, and naturally being by you it has a hot love scene thrown in.

BTW, did you win the competition?

My mind being what it is, I can see how things could get interesting if it were real life, though.

With Lee and Lynn being the type of people that they are, they would likely want to help others dealing with autism, and also with back problems similar to Lynn's. While Laresa could do this on a small scale, word would spread and on a larger scale it is likely that Laresa would soon run up against the rule about affecting history. One way around it would be for Laresa to 1) keep it a mystery as to how people recovered, 2) Make other recoveries slower, 3) Subtly affect people so that they accept such recoveries without broadcasting the news, and 4) limit the recoveries to people Lynn and Lee have a personal conection with.

Wonderful fairy tale quality.