All Comments on 'George and Shawna Ch. 01'

Seems pretty decent so far. But if that last line is an indicator, she's about to fuck up a second time and any hope of reconciling her marriage will be gone.

...but somehow I know you will screw this up.

...I wish you had just ended it with one more page describing how his hidden intent was to make her cheat again so he could give her the boot.And the kids would know(how cruel?).And she would be destroyed knowing what a piece of trash she was.Yeah,kill em' all!-pistolpackinpete

After only 6 mos she is debating whether to say the hell with it? I think maybe a year would have been better. Hell I got no sex once for 5 months for just calling my Gf a bitch! LOL

why do I fear you'll backslide into your old well trodden path?

Well written. But it leaves me very uncomfortable... I am not sure if I want to read the next chapter. If he does something positive it will be worth while but if I hides in the closet.....

she knew and also told she had to quit where she was working but never looked for another place or quit. that is a sign and a strong one. no healing possible. so don't make it a long one. desaster is programmed.

good one JPB.

Good story! Well conceived and written. Definitely want to read the next chapter.Thanks for the good story....Rich

in nine words during one awful paragraph of bad erotic writing. Lazy. And beyond unlikely. Mediocrity as an art form but you're a better author than this...Mancelt.

Fairly well-written, moves along pretty nicely. Please don't take too long for the next part(s).

she went back to the boyfriend, since she really loved what he did to her. <P>

after some more months, the idiot husband said: Okay, I was wrong. Please, come back to me. So long as you suck me every night, like what you did with your boyfriends, and I am fine. <p>

and they lived a new and happy and interesting life after that; although he could never trust her completely like beofer. But both he and she were fine with that: she gets to fuck around but this time with his permission! <p>

this is JPB's main theme, with tiny variations to it.

Of course the complete story is posted at SOL but this was a captivating story the first time and remains one of the few that we actually like from JPB [sorry, not into male wimp characters that are predominant in 98% of JPB stories]. However, this particular effort has some unusual [not plausible] twists that makes it an enjoyable read. Thank you JPB for at least crafting a few stories of semi-non-wimp male characters [although, one has to look really hard to find the semi-non-wimp offerings].

unfit mother to stay in the home and raise children than to divorce her and get her out of the childrens lives. You hear this shit all the time and basiclly all it does it ruin the image forming in childrems minds of what a loving marriage should be. If he cant divorce her why not simply off her in a way that is untraceable? You dont keep trash it just begins to decompose and rot, you throw trash away. This woman is worse than trash she is scum. Maybe he just needs enough evidence to make sure the court finds her an unfit mother and is provoking her into doing some very stupid things.

This is just a broken record of weak wimps in absurd settings respun by the writer.<P>

No real man would act like this except bobies wimp.

why he didnt see that george had a accident...what would his dear ole wife think when george turned up dead all at once...i am like her hubby i dont think i could touch her again at least till the man she was with was dead....but i also think i would have to fuck someone else to pay her back for what she did ...i guess then maybe she would want to kill my lover ...well as the bible says an eye for an eye

or "not to make a decision is to make a decision."<P>

The wife did a terrible thing. Then she compounded it by having sex again in the morning. Then she further compounded it by telling George 'everything' she did with Glen and when she did it. And how much she loved it? Did she tell him about all the orgasms Glen was able to give her? No wonder he shut her down.<P>

George was right not to do anything immediately. But now 6 months have passed. Make a decision. Keep her or not. Both of you need to move on in one way or the other. She's right - time for resolution. Divorce or not but choose.<P>

Thanks for sharing.

Can't believe how pious some of the readers are. If they feel like that, then why on earth do they read stories in 'loving wives'?

Masochists or something maybe. Great writinf Bob, please keep them coming.

I gather, after having read the 1st very well written chapter, that it's the beginning of a classic story by a master writer of "Loving Wives" tales. At this early point however it's hard for me to offer any constructive comments. The direction that the story takes - that's what I await. RAG

How about fixing the other part of the problem! She screwed up and deserves any punishment he doles out. But, she had lots of help. Some retribution should also rain down on Glen, like cutting his nuts off. She allowed it to happen, Glen MADE it happen - he should be held accountable by George.

Don't let her stray again -thats too stereo-typed

wife, girlfriend, daughter, sister and I read your stories, I would not hesitate for a second to slice your throat in your sleep. You are a disgusting make chauvanistic pig! and the real sad part of it is, you probably don't even know you are. Lines like "went without George touching her the more she wanted to. Not necessarily Glen, but somebody!" equate the women in your stories to be no better than a dog in heat... the men of course are virtuous, and can go months without sex for their principal... but no, not women, once their sex starts throbbing they can't think, can't control their lust... they are just low animals to you aren't they Bob. You are such, a sad and pathetic person, my only saving grace is that after reading some of your stories, it pretty obvious that you don't have any women in your life, you certainly don't get laid.

Gee "Bob, if I was a woman in your life" why don't you tell us how you really feel. OMG I sure am glad none of the women in my life aren't as wacked as your comments appear to make you. Guess what, don't like it, don't read it.

JPB writing is very good, that he can garnish a response like above just proves my point.

I'd like to use that literary crutch to crush the writing windpipe of anyone who uses it.

JPB is wimp writer,very stupid story

This is an idiotic story that makes no sense at all. If JPB expects people to believe this, be entertained by this, or enjoy this he is deluding himself. From now on if I see JPB's name on a story I will certainly exclude it from my readings. Unbelieveably bad. anon jerry

I read a lot of your stories. I like them a lot. But one thing that I am finding a bit repetitive is the guy/girl saying 'throwing away a perfect marriage' whether it was the thrower or the throwee.

It doesn't exist this perfect marriage. One should be allowed on SOD card for every story. It can be 'I love big cocks and I'm willing to be treated anyway to get them.' It could be 'I was drugged and blackmailed'. Maybe it's 'I love you entirely but I can't live without my basketball team on the side...'. And the old standby 'After twenty years of pronging the same old woman, she still gets me up enough for 4-5 times a week for multiple sessions.'

You can do one. You can do two. But to accept all of them is a bit much. Not that this story does it, but the 'perfect marriage' trope again made me run long.

My comment deals more with 'perfect marriagese' then this story per se.

I enjoyed this story on a second read. I still don't believe in perfect marriages.

First alcohol does not cause anyone to have sex. Alcohol is a depressant; it is not a stimulant. Therefore, alcohol is more likely to prevent sex than cause it. The only exceptions are if alcohol is use as an excuse for doing what someone wants to do anyway or if a woman passes out and is raped when otherwise she could have prevented it.

Furthermore, it is not possible for someone she knows to force a woman to have sex against her will unless subconsciously she wants it. All any woman needs to do is say, "If you don't stop right now, as soon as you are finished, I am calling the police and charging you with rape." Not even a stupid horny guy would continue knowing he is facing 20 years in prison for a piece of tail.

Finally, it is not possible that she would have confessed to George. She would not even show any remorse. Women are designed to excel at sneaky sex. They have evolved since before the Stone Age to near perfection at deception. Women that did not excel are not our ancestors because, during the Stone Age, their mates would have killed them or their children or deserted them which would lead to dead end in evolutionary terms.

However, he has revealed a whole new layer of idiocy!

1 - True, alcohol does not MAKE anyone have sex. However, it can depress the inhibitions AND it can cloud judgement, which can lead to making choices you wouldn't normally make, including having sex with someone other than your significant other. This does not constitute an excuse, but it is a contributing factor.

2 - Seriously, DWornock? "...,it is not possible for someone she knows to force a woman to have sex against her will unless subconsciously she wants it." This is the most ignorant statement I have ever heard anyone make. You ever hear of "date rape"? Do you realize that more rapes are committed by someone who knew the victim than by strangers? A woman can say "no!" all she wants, but if the attacker doesn't accept it, if they are willing to commit rape, then threatening them with the cops won't necessarily stop them. They'll just throw out the "she was asking for it" defense or something like that to throw it back into a "he said, she said" situation. It happens all the time! Look at how many rapists are in prison right now because they were willing to risk 20 years for a piece of tail.....

3 - Finally, I'm not even sure how to respond to your final point. It was so idiotic, ignorant, insulting, and downright STUPID, that there is no reply that can be made to point out your stupidity. It is so glaringly obvious that to argue it would cause me to lose 100 IQ points instantly. While that would still make me a genius compared to you, I just might forget how to tie my shoes and that would be annoying.

If you do actually read this, DWornock, I'm sorry for using big words that you might have trouble with......

She says she can’t quit and look for a new job. Maybe not, but she can keep her job and look for a new job!

She's told her husband what she did - all of it. Why not quit and sue for sexual harassment? If she gets divorced she's going to need money to support herself. At the very least she needs to show her husband that she is serious about trying to repair their marriage and quitting her job is a good first step. I have a bad feeling about where this is going........

I want a do over and will give you an apology. TK U MLJ LV NV

Too easy.on the cheating.bitch. Why do they always think the husband should get over it?

She cheated on him but at least she confessed it all to her husband. Give her a medal for gallantry that! Now the hubby must grovel before his honest slut-wife and beg for her forgiveness.

she did NOT try...at all.

she sent him flowers and candy? what is he, a highschool girl?

she's a loser. she should have QUIT HER JOB. Full fucking stop. The guy she fucks is there.

Next obvious step....THERAPY. Very hard, and very serious behavior therapy...for her...and ONLY her...because she was the giant fuck up.

If she did those two very obvious things....next would be OFFER HALL PASS the gesture means a lot.

After the bare minimum effort is taken....she should be offering couple's therapy....and begging for dirty sex with him.

I should mention some other obvious steps would be to confess her sins to her parents or her kids....someone. Because right now it's being rug swept. She has suffered nothing except not getting her pussy plowed. Boo hoo. Big deal. Entitled people deserve misery.

Some coffee and a long hot shower then driving home is three hours, yet he was going to pick her up? What about her car?

Her husband did not have sex for 6 months...bullshit ridiculous writing.