by sunburycd
Loved the flow of the chapter as you brought together two separate stories and timelines..waiting in anticipation for Chapter 3
This whole chapter could have been about Carol and her boys. Thank God there is another Chapter.
she shaved off her bush. grown women should have hair down there, not be bare like a prepubescent girl. just one man's opinion.otherwise great story.
Fun, fun!! Both families are going to be sharing for a long time...
It is too bad Carol's sons had to wait 20 years for the fun to start...but, better late than never!
Five Stars!!
Great story. Only one thing I would change. In my opinion, women, especially mature women, should have some hair. Regardless of the shape or length, it makes them look like women, not young girls. Get I'm just old school, and a HUGE fan of the 'bush'. Other than that, great story. Kind of feel for Carol's boys, but better late than never.