All Comments on 'Georgia Ch. 14'

..but I think this is where I part ways with young Miss Rich Bitch.

I'm not exactly sure what the author was intending our feelings toward the main character to be but over the past four or five chapters I've been coming to the conclusion that she is nothing more than a typical rich daddy's little prick-teasing bitch.

Why does she have to loudly embarrass people?.. why does she have to 'blow them (him) off'?.. why does she have to constantly defy all those around who have been charged with keeping her safe?..

Why?.. because daddy's rich and she can do whatever the f''k she likes.

Sorry but, like I say, I really liked the way this story started and I really did look forward to each new chapter to see what else our heroine would get up to. But I've only really skim-read the last few chapters and nothing really surprised me or made me want to go back and re-read. More of the same each chapter. Miss RB decides to go somewhere she really shouldn't, wearing almost nothing and do something she really shouldn't.. orgasms in front of lots of people who didn't really go there to see it.. she either meets someone and fucks them or meets someone and publicly humiliates them.. never gets into trouble, is berated or arrested.. everyone she chooses to play with ends up doing her bidding, none over refuse.. then safely back to daddies boat with not so much as a warning from anyone to keep it decent where kids are.

OK.. so it's fantasy. It's erotic literature. It's fiction. But still... come on, a little realism helps. Yes, sex and indecency are rife in (some parts of) Ibiza. But so is crime. It was hinted at in one chapter with a suggestion of kidnapping and slavery but then nothing. Seriously!? She publicly humiliates and exposes two (presumably) shady characters with friends who can make young girls disappear and then....nothing. No retribution later.. no meeting down a dark alley that she is bound to go down looking for a place she shouldn't really go to.. no rape behind a nightclub.. no sneaking on board daddies boat in the night and... nothing.

Although the standard plot device of someone in daddy's employ watching over her, unseen, all the time would probably have come in handy here anyway.

It's sad. I *really, really* love this authors stories. Both here and on other sites. But this one isn't one of the better ones.

Oh, by the way.. no todos hablamos español. (We don't all speak Spanish). Perhaps a little less showing off with the language skills and save us the trouble of having to use google translate which kind of breaks the mood and flow of reading the story.

All this is my own opinion! Readers are encouraged to read it themselves and make up their own damned minds.