by coaster2
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this 1st chapter and look forward to reading the rest. Very easily worth 5 stars. Thank you for sharing.
Can't wait to see if Ginny come's out with her "claws" after Georgette. and how her Family fits in.
enjoyed and kept me thinking of whats going to happen next. I hope it wont be to long for you to continue the story.
It seems like I may have read this story before, but perhaps that is a false memory. Looking forward to the next chapter. As usual, very good character development.
The question of dealing with life when you have a deficiency, the interview and the interaction with his lady friend all hold our attention.
Didn't need it! Good start. I know the sex will come, but it is much better when it fits the story rather than is the object of the story. Five stars, gladly.
jc
What a great 1st chapter...so looking forward to enjoying the rest. REALLY like the way you are writing this!
motorbike
Someone's been using the UK dictionary again.
Americans (well 99.999% of them) would say motorcycle.
us 1 runs the eastern coast expressways west to east low 1 to 95 num. start on west coast even num. north to south 4 starts in Fla. gets higher going north
There’s an elusive quality to the relationship building in this story, that’s quite fascinating to read, it’s exceedingly well written from that pov. Thoroughly enjoying it. 5⭐️
flarebel2327 - He is not referring to US 1 that starts at Madawaska, ME and goes to Key West, Fl. He is referring to CA 1, also known as the PCH 1, or the Pacific Coast Highway. They are both exciting drives, especially the last 100+ miles over the ocean to Key West.
good writing and setting up the long (?) story. I just thought 4 pages was far too long.
I see that I read this story 9 years ago and liked it. I think I will it again!
5
I just completed the entire story. It is very well written, very entertaining, and deeply satisfying.