All Comments on 'Georgie Girl Ch. 01-03'

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Sid0604Sid0604almost 10 years ago
Another great start...

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this 1st chapter and look forward to reading the rest. Very easily worth 5 stars. Thank you for sharing.

C_frommnC_frommnalmost 10 years ago
Great Start

Can't wait to see if Ginny come's out with her "claws" after Georgette. and how her Family fits in.

cfwolf58cfwolf58almost 10 years ago
interesting.....

enjoyed and kept me thinking of whats going to happen next. I hope it wont be to long for you to continue the story.

Sidney43Sidney43almost 10 years ago

It seems like I may have read this story before, but perhaps that is a false memory. Looking forward to the next chapter. As usual, very good character development.

bruce22bruce22almost 10 years ago
Yet Another Fine Story

The question of dealing with life when you have a deficiency, the interview and the interaction with his lady friend all hold our attention.

CalliciousCalliciousalmost 10 years ago
No sex

Didn't need it! Good start. I know the sex will come, but it is much better when it fits the story rather than is the object of the story. Five stars, gladly.

jc

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyalmost 10 years ago
Great

Most promising story! I will enjoy reading more.

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 10 years ago
I REALLY like this one!

What a great 1st chapter...so looking forward to enjoying the rest. REALLY like the way you are writing this!

Tw0Cr0wsTw0Cr0wsabout 8 years ago
wrong dictionary?

motorbike

Someone's been using the UK dictionary again.

Americans (well 99.999% of them) would say motorcycle.

flarebel2327flarebel2327over 5 years ago
U S highways

us 1 runs the eastern coast expressways west to east low 1 to 95 num. start on west coast even num. north to south 4 starts in Fla. gets higher going north

Rancher46Rancher46over 3 years ago

Enjoyed the start to what I assume will be another great story 5+ stars

PurplefizzPurplefizzover 1 year ago

There’s an elusive quality to the relationship building in this story, that’s quite fascinating to read, it’s exceedingly well written from that pov. Thoroughly enjoying it. 5⭐️

JimQ2JimQ29 months ago

flarebel2327 - He is not referring to US 1 that starts at Madawaska, ME and goes to Key West, Fl. He is referring to CA 1, also known as the PCH 1, or the Pacific Coast Highway. They are both exciting drives, especially the last 100+ miles over the ocean to Key West.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman7 months ago

good writing and setting up the long (?) story. I just thought 4 pages was far too long.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy5 months ago

I see that I read this story 9 years ago and liked it. I think I will it again!

5

waifwaif5 months ago

I just completed the entire story. It is very well written, very entertaining, and deeply satisfying.

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