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by GiddyDreamer

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Meh

chytownchytownover 2 years ago

*** First stories are always stiff keep writing and get a editor to help with your storyline. Good luck on future stories.. Thanks for sharing.

YouwritelikearetardfucksYouwritelikearetardfucksabout 1 year ago

Mother...? Some serious Norman Bates vibes you have there sir, dialogue is just awful and cringey, robotic feeling, good premise I think you can definitely do better just keep working at it

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