by CaseyBea
Great to see a new story series from you! And it was hot! I can see all the possibilities ahead.
Very nice start, thank you and please continue !!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter !
hottest story I have read this year. my wife and i sat here and read it all twice. thank you. please write more.
Nastiest mommy in the whole fucking world. Cum in her pussy; cum in her mouth; cum on her face and tits. She deserves a big load in her ass and then stand over her son’s cock and push his cum out of her ass and all over his cock. Finish it by getting on her knees and licking his cum off his cock.
More please
You jumped from first person to third person. Also, if it’s a step-son, is it really incest?
Give sexy young man Sam a splash of sexy chest hair -- he seems a mature, well-built young man eager to please his step mom!
Cindy's only 9 months older than her sister being Mindy\Cindy's only 10 months older than
her sister being Mindy
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Mindy's already much bigger sex slut than her sister Cindy . . . . .
while process visiting boyfriend being Sam , Cindy does bring sister being Mindy ,
basically because , Mindy requested about going ................
Mindy's wanted Mindy's needed , Ann intimately Ann sexually , long time
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does Ann does Mindy , become intimate become sexual , while Cindy while Sam
same building ?
does Ann begin everything with Mindy ? does Mindy begin everything with Ann ?
what section of the house do they begin ? what section of the house do they end ?
does Cindy - catch Ann , catch Sam ( if so , explain tons ) ?
does Cindy - catch Ann , catch Mindy ( if so , explain tons ) ?
does Sam - catch Ann , catch Mindy ( if so , explain tons ) ?
has Ann , has Mindy - ever done intimate things sexual things prior this ?
is Cindy - thee other female that , Ann told Sam about , threesome thing ?
is Mindy - thee other female that , Ann told Sam about , threesome thing ?
has Mindy - gotten intimate , gotten sexual , either Bill \ either Tony
( if so , explain tons ) ?
has somebody , has anybody - caught Mindy , getting intimate ,
getting sexual , either Bill \ either Tony
( if so , explain tons ) ?
Sharing your mom with friends? That's the biggest turn off in the incest genre.
A warning on the gay stuff would have been nice. I would have skipped it. Otherwise it was good.
Casey,
You were doing great right up to the Bi Dad stuff.
Sorry. It's just not my thing.
You still got 4 Stars for this being so well paced, and written.
I'm gonna keep going, unless it goes off the rails too much.
Fingers crossed.
WB
To: JustmeWB
I appreciate that you are objective enough to still give the story 4 stars on merit even though it had some content you didn't care for. Thank you! I hope you'll continue reading this series and my other stories, as well.
Love,
Casey
A very hot story and very entertaining except for the Bi male stuff. Bi female doesn't appeal to me much either though I know some people like that kind of thing. It could use better proof reading but it is much better than some in that regard. I look forward to seeing the next part.