All Comments on 'Getting Extra Friendly'

What's with all the words begining with Hannah? Also the first poker hand had a pair of fives and a full house fives over eights. That makes a deck with 5 fives. Otherwise a good story.

This story was written with a high level of wit, creativity, and a special pathway toward arousal. I loved her vivid descriptions and the insightful manner in which she defined her characters. (Especially the loveliness and sensuality of the females.) Great job!

I'm guessing you did a find and replace on "Bel", and replaced it with "Hannah" - am I right? Hence "Hannaht" instead of "Belt" and "Hannahieve" instead of "Believe".

I'd love to know why her name changed, it would really add to an already delicious story.

Great story, intelligently designed and hot. I just wonder why Jason was surprised so little by the turn of events. Oh, and please replace the Hannahs with Bels again. :)

damn good thank you love your stories they are the best. You rock nikki

That story was hot. I wish those kinds of 4somes were that easy to accomplish. Sinful, but em fun!

Was Hannah's name originally Bel? That would explain why the computer has changed the word believe to hannahieve!

ive ran out of adjectives to describe how awesome your writing is. outstanding again xxx

I think in the first section you meant "dessert," as in a sweet after dinner treat, not "desert," as in "dry as a." Remember, "dessert" has two s's not one (because you ALWAYS want more). Aside from that and the weird "Hannahieve" issue, this was a fantastic story!

"I cannot Hannahieve that I am doing this," Sarah said with a laugh a she stood up to pull her shorts down, P2

Hannah dropped her Hannahly to the bed P3

in once place too long. P3

The mechanics of writing are critical to good writing.

YOU NEED TO GO FURTHER AND HAVE THE BOYS DOING EACH OTHER.

WHY IS IT THAT GUY'S ALWAYS WANT TO SEE GIRLS DOING EACH OTHER BUY ITS NOT OK FOR GUY'S TO ENJOY EACH OTHER?

Really enjoyable story. I liked the build up. Thanks for sharing

...never ever, got that action in my youth. I would've died and gone to heaven then.'

There's a lot of playful fucking happening here.

Sounds like a great time.. ..

Another Nikki experience..!?!

Pretty hot

This story is ruined by the clear search and replace the author did. I guess the character’s name was originally “belle”?

awesome

Love everything Nikki writes. This is an early example, straight into the sex, but kinky sexy too. I always wonder if this is fantasy or in some way reflecting an experience.

So, who was Bel? Someone who got mad at seeing her name in a draft?

And "breast nipple"? What other sorts of nipples did the poor girl have there?

Hot story! Maybe the sequel will be bisexual for guys too?)

"...standing and undoing the Hannaht of his jeans"

Huh??