All Comments on 'Gift From A God Ch. 03'

that was the hottest scene tat i have read in a minute. I could feel and smell everything. don't wait to long for the next part.

Incredible read - you have a talent! :-)

JR Parz

Don't quit writing, you have a great talent

Story is really picking up speed. Some nice variety in the action instead of the usual, "make her spread her legs and screw".

I agree with everyone else. All 3 chapters hace been excelent. Keep up the great work.

I liked the story greatly. Its after a long time that I'm reading stuff as good as this. What Makes this story special for me is that, my fantasies are also quite the same. It was like listening to myself.

Just keep it up and don't make it RAW. Subtlity is fine and appreciated by most people.

Best Wishes,

Gyaan

Great wording and slow building this is truely great work. Don't stop now your on a roll.

The story is to fuuny for me to concentrate. I love your writing, humor and detail

I have never wanted to be a man more than I do right this moment. That blow job was incredible.

Blowjobs are gr8

Go fuck yourself m8

Godlike powers and it takes 4 chapters to get a blow job?

5 stars.