All Comments on 'Gillian's Descent Ch. 04'

although she's got what's coming to her, somewhere down the line i'd like a bit of payback to add a bit of spice. but i am looking fwd to prison bitch.

You really know how to treat a lady!

Hey man, this is a great story. First time in ages I've been checking into a story site desperately hoping for the next chapter!

Can't wait to see what happens next. Would love to see Gillian exposed to more drugs in prison and see her become addicted. To read about her back on the streets on release with a habit to feed would be cool! The ultimate degradation!

Keep up the good work !

hell's bell's she must have realy pissed them off they've realy got it in for her can't wait for the prison part though 5 year's seems a bit steep hope she gets her own back it would realy spice things up even more spicy that it is, great story keep it up

If you wouldn't do that to a dog it probably below human convention. The louisville slugger was beyond funsies and so this story has taken a turn downward - way down.

Why do some writers get on a roll and ruin the possiblities with absurdities so cruel and scornful that we feel pity for the brutally damaged. Guess its an underdog thing.

So writer - you go to far blacktooth! Think about this for the next one as this one is tubed.

And I didn't think you went too far at all. The scene with the baseball bat was so hot and she deserved it for being such a bitch. Keep it up.

-- Maria

5 years! i think the skank should have got at lease 20 years hard labor!

The story is going along just fine.