All Comments on 'Gina Seduces Her Daddy'

by Boxlicker101

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

I am big fan of the short, sweet, and hot stories. Good job.

pa47epa47eabout 13 years ago
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Well Done..........just a bit more color on your canvas.........write write write...........

matttheredneckmatttheredneckabout 13 years ago
You've got some great work

Great story. I have to agree with the other comment about it could use a little more detail, but overall great work. will definitely read more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
start reading shoguy for tips

you gotta read shoguy for tips on how to write dude

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 7 years ago

Loved it. Very hot. Just wished it could have been longer.

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