All Comments on 'Gina's 18th Birthday!'

This story is the same as your previous story "Happy Birthday Sis!" What give !!

Where you thinking that since readers have 2 eyes, you would post twice so we would end up reading in stereoscopy, because if it's the case then post a third time so then it will be in stereoscopy.

so only 1 star.

The dialog was very stiff (no pun intended). People don't talk like that.

REPOST

It wasn't bad the first time!

Repost of a story you already posted, only changing the Title, that is pretty sorry. One star is all you should be getting on this and if they had a place for negative stars you would have got that.