All Comments on 'Gingerbread'

Great story w/ a modern take on an old favorite. I'll never look at gingerbread the same way again. Looking forward to more from you. Steve

Like the previous commentor I agree on the new take on an old classic. Keep up the fine work.

really well and I gave you a five but...don't you hate those buts...one time his cup was empty and then you had him sipping from it..and some mispelled words and such, proofread and you will have a winner here..it's fabulous darling..simply fabulous.

I really found this exciting! Humor & hot sex---great job!

I really found this exciting! Humor & hot sex---great job!

in just the right way! Don't stop now.

I just wanted it to go on and on. It was a pleasure to read and to think about. I want to read it again! Is there a part too? It could be the start of a book! Jim Williams (JimmieBlakesong)

Thanks to everybody who has commented so far. There isn't a part two, but who knows about the future? Thanks for all the great comments. I aim to please and, while I want my work to be well-written, I also want it to be really hot!

LOL, is there a way to comment here without voting for myself? Ah, well, 5 of course.

I don't know what it's based on...

This was compulsive - but awful.

Stan

Stan--

Hansel and Gretel. I'm not sure what "compulsive but awful" mean, but I appreciate you talking the time to respond/vote. Even bad news is feedback -- if you ever wanted to share specifics, feel free.

Michelle

Does it get any better? NOPE! This is fabulously HOT.

This story was excellent; you have a gift.

Incest is usually "Ih" for me, but under the guiding hand of the witch, somehow it works here. Hot.

Really great story. Very hot. It really got me going.

THAT WAS THE BEST SEX STORY EVER!

It started slow and then the action wasn't really as fun as it could have been. You need to get the action going and then build to an incredible climax for all involved.

Fantastic story, well paced and hot. A great take on a classic. I loved the line from Greta about visiting daddy, does this mean a sequel is I the offing?. Keep up the good work 5*+ x

Forget the incest, just from a literary point of view this is good. I found myself reading it more for the story than anything else, which is rare. Really good stuff.