All Comments on 'Girl in the Wardrobe'

I love this so much, please continue it! I've been having this fantasy for a very long time and when I read this, I just couldn't contain myself. Oh god please add to this, ill do anything

It's an adaptation of a fantasy I had a number of years ago. The basic premise is the same, but the characters were a bit psychologically different.

As for continuing it, the thought has crossed my mind, since some have "suggested" that I continue with some of my other stories, but I currently have no plans to continue this one.

I have other stories in mind that I'm working on developing, and I don't work well with a divided focus, so, sorry to disappoint. :) If I had more time, who knows what would happen, but I also have to work for a living.

For what it's your comment gives me eye-hearts. Thanks.

I read this on after "The Girl down the Hall " both are excellent stories and I found that I liked both . This is not my usual reading material ,but I like them very much . They both got 5*'s from me .

Thanks for the read

tx cracker

I never comment but this story was among the best I have read in awhile, hope you continue it! Thanks

Now that was a hell of a story. I wasn't expecting something of this quality wyen I started reading today, but you have gone above and beyond.

Hot sex a decent plot and character development. Very impressive. 5 stars.

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Blessed Be

Thank you. I really appreciate that.

Really excellent, I usually prefer to read stories told from the guy's perspective but this was great!

Sometimes a story such as this doesn't need to be longer. You left us just enough to extrapolate in a direction that will satisfy my hankering for a little romance, even in erotic stories. I think you've made the right decision, leave it as it is, because it's in a very good place right now!

This one hit almost all my favorite points!

I wish i could find a girl like her in real life.

Thank you for sharing this tale. Made my day.

Such a cute story. Really a lot of fun and well written. Thank you.

Hol effin shit, that was the hottest thing I have ever read. Thank you.

I'm surprised and delighted by how well this has been received. I'm very pleased and grateful.

This is definitely a very enjoyable story. It's a kind of story that let's to get into somebody's shoes, into somebody's mindset and feelings. What it is like to be a homeless girl who is counting cents, is borderline starving and and hasn't washed for two weeks? What kind of soul is the soul, who has craves food just to not be hungry? I found her mental calculation whether she should steal or not steal very touching. Also the scene where she realized that the bed linens would smell if she laid on them. This is a real study of a character and a real study of human being, which I see very rarely on Literotica. I might have a week spot for it, because 30 years ago, when I was just a few years older than the character of this story, I knew it too what it's like to survive on $20 per month. I think the author creates a very believable character here.

The sex part, while a lot of fun, felt less realistic. Nevertheless, I think the idea is brilliant. She's not having casual sex with a random stranger. She has actually developed a relationship with him through use of his home and observation. The house reflects the character of the male - a working professional, tidy, clean, organized. He is someone she would like to be associated with. While spending time in his house she is indirectly trying him on as a life partner. I would think that the sexual exploration of that man is a reasonable curiosity from her side. She tried his house without consent. She ate his food without his consent. Now she is trying his body without his consent. The only thing that I found a bit off was her own elevated sexual excitement. The electricity jolts in her sex were a bit of exaggeration. The orgasm felt like exaggeration. It felt that the girl's character lost a part of her independence and was being manipulated by the author.

The ending episode of them meeting in a burger place - really outstanding, great writing. Limited number of words, great implied connection and expectations. Very enjoyable and impressive.