All Comments on 'Girl Next Door First Session'

Although erotic, for me it wasn't as arousing as your other stories. Instead I was drawn to the story itself and the vivid pictures you created. Being of your approximate age, I can easily relate to that era and the emotions of that age.

Your use of details (the Prell, the old nudie mags, looking in the 'obvious' place of dad's sock drawer) and self-depreciating insight (your desciption of grabbing the mags to stuff back into the drawer, the realization that women might enjoy sex, the 'special needs' student analogy) made for an enjoyable story. And you didn't ruin it by claiming to have a 10 inch crank or that you lasted for hours as you took every one of her holes that day and made her your bitch for life.

I look forward to reading more of your work.