All Comments on 'Girl On the Beach'

Island magic in Canada!

5

Sweet story. Easy read I enjoyed it.

Cheers

SAGE

Clever little twist at the end.

So I didn't come to Literotica expecting sweetness, but that's exactly what this story was. A sweet little whirlwind romance and a fun read. Good work.

Excellent!

A very enjoyable read with a perfect balance of fun, romance and sex. Sure it could have fit in several categories but well deserves its 5 stars. Cheers, Andy

Great Story. Loved it!!

Sweet very good story! Thanks

As soon as I saw your name I knew this was going to be an excellent story. This story is very fun with a nice pace and well written! Thank you for sharing. 45/23 Mature!!!

Great story, thanks for sharing it.

But I have to say...

"heureuse" is the female form, it should be "Je suis vraiment heureux".

Also, "vous", in that context, is the polite/formal way of addressing someone. "de te revoir" would be how he would have probably said it. Had he known that she would be his boss, saying "vous" would had reflected that relationship.

Great story, thanks for sharing it.

But I have to say...

"heureuse" is the female form, it should be "Je suis vraiment heureux".

Also, "vous", in that context, is the polite/formal way of addressing someone. "de te revoir" would be how he would have probably said it. Had he known that she would be his boss, saying "vous" would had reflected that relationship.

23 vs 45. I’d say that’s pretty May -December to me. I live is a place where those kind of resorts exist. In fact its how I met my beautiful wife. A nice fun read. Well done.

Great story! One minor detail, though…the phrase is “The CARPET matched the drapes.” Curtains and drapes are pretty much the same thing…

It certainly wasn’t enough of a problem to make me not thoroughly enjoy the story, though!

Nice recovery on dealing with a massively unlikely coincedence. I'm also prepared to accept that grandad pimped his favourite granddaughter and successor out to a man old enough to be her father. Shit, it made the story work and they are your characters, so they do whatever you want. 5 *

Nice work, S&F! This would work for “On The Job” too!

Wonderful, feel good, story. Thank you!

Standard "May-December" romance, although it was more like "july-December" Pleasant read

Well told story, as always. And, a bit of a surprise at the end. Good job, as always.

Love makes you either a fool without live or a fool to not jump on a delicious offer. Well written with an ending the shiuld mske fir future chspters, eh? 5*

Fantastic, lots of fun!

Wait, what? An April Fools "prank" with a positive outcome? Lol.

Sexy, cute, fun story. I may have a little crush on Maddy.

I loved it. I think we need more adventures from Jean-Pierre and Maddy. I know you had them have a child, but you could tell stories from any time in their relationship. Fill us in. A series is needed for sure. Thank you for the story.

What a great story. You can do more stories with Maddy and J-P

Loved the story and the twists. Smuttyandfun it was!

Lovely

I wax hoping for a HEA ending but didn't see that one coming. Loved that his boss "put" them together.

Romantic fantasy squared. Helps that Maddy’s grandfather is having a new child and a new great-grandchild in the same year. Jean Pierre is insanely lucky in work and love.

A beautiful story. Loved the ending.

A beautifully written story, loved the way the two characters fell in love and the making love sessions were very tastefully executed. Made my imagination just grow with each time. Loved it.

So sweet I'm getting cavities! Great romantic (and smutty AND fun) story!

Hi, S&F, fun and story with good characters and a nice prank revealed at the end. Great job, 5*.

So the grandfather/boss set her up with a guy old enough to be her father and denied him the promotion he deserved and she lied about being on the pill and...hell, I can't type anymore with a straight face, great story, loved it!

Thanks to everyone who took the time to read this fun little getaway adventure and leave a comment. Unfortunately, this has to be a one and done, since it was for a contest. I'm working a few more stories though, that I hope you'll enjoy!

A bit unbelievable at the beginning and especially the end, but still a sweet story. Thanks...

A beautiful love story.

A large age difference can work. I met my wife on a dating site and within 8 weeks we agreed we wanted to be together, despite that I am 23 years older than her, in fact she is only 3 months older than my daughter. She is 60 and I am 83.

This is my 3th April fools story I read today, I can't say they are really good 'april fools' stories with pranks, what is the prank here? I read one a long time ago, where a girl pranked a brother and sister into the same bed, that was an real april fools prank story. This is just a good love story. I loved this one especially. Very beautiful love story, 5 stars.

My Mistake this was just a really good love story, not part of the april fool's contest.

Excellent story. Reading flowed, never bored.

You are damn good writer. That’s all I have to say. I’d make a suggestion or two but you are doing fine.

What a lovely story. I do wonder why she never called him - a throw away line about her phone being destroyed on the flight, or losing all of her contacts, or something would've made sense. But otherwise, a truly enjoyable love story. 5*

Very sweet and sexy story. Well Done. !!