All Comments on 'Girl Scout Leader Training Ch. 01'
by m_storyman_x
- 10 Comments
mtstoryover 15 years agoI don't remember camping in the Boys and Girls scout being that fun. I help out in both since I had a Boy and Girl in scouting. Thanks
formazeover 15 years agoCool story. I did a stint in the girl scouts and found the leaders were just like this. At home no, but out in the woods they were wild women.
TwoHOTFORU69over 15 years agoMe, I would have done all of them that wanted it and said in my prayers that I hope my wife never found out and promise never ever to do it again.! What a fantasy.! Great story and I hope there is more to it, Please.
Anonymousover 15 years agoI new a scout leader once, she would fit right into this storie.A good read thks
regmax25over 15 years agoI new a scout leader once, she would fit right into this storie.A good read thks
Anonymousover 15 years agoExcellent story, best I've read in a while! I'll be even happier when the sequel comes out, hopefully soon.
master4sweetsubbalmost 15 years agoI have read a few of your stories, and with every one there have been numerous gramatical errors. This story gets a low rating simply because you confused Sally and Sandy numerous times in the end, to the point I had no idea who their name really was. If your using an editor, perhaps you should speak with them as to why these mistakes are getting past them. If not, then you should look for one.
mememe621over 14 years agoI really love this story. It's fun, it's hot, it's even heartwarming. You do a great job making the male character truly likeable--I feel like I know him and would like to BE him (not just for the amazing sex). What sets this chapter apart is 1) you spend more time than usual developing the women's personalities, which makes their seduction of Mike a lot hotter. And 2) there really is a seduction, and it's individualized. Different women progress at different rates, by trying different things. The reader can really tell these women apart, and that's awesome.
jimbo12about 14 years agoYou do a great job of making the whole situation sound like it was a real event. I like the way you are reluctant to cheat on your wife, but after a while it is just impossible to stay faithful.
Anonymousover 7 years agoSeems like Emily on the first page turned into Mary, both were described as the one with a naked puss, and after Mary was introduced,Emily does not appear again
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