by Nikkiejanes
Stories by Nikki Janes are always winners. Ignore the troll. He posts in every incest tale that he hates lesbian sex and it should only be romantic brother sister, one on one only. Methinks he has some unresolved sister issues. His single 1 star flame shouldn't matter much because I've no doubt you'll receive scads of 5s, including mine. So yes, 5/5 stars.
Dewey Cheatham
Pretty good, but needs an editor. There are some spots where you switch back and forth between verb tenses, some awkward phrases. It's much better than a lot of what shows up on Literotica, just needs some polishing.
I'm not certain it's that they can't create a brother sister incest story, so much as it they're writing for their audience. You do know lesbian stories are some of the most viewed, by men and women, right? I won't dis you like the other guy, but seriously, if you see in the synopsis things might not be to your liking, and this synopsis did hold the promise of girl on girl, then don't read it. Rate the authors on the quality of their work, not an adherence to your likes and dislikes. I give it a solid 5/5.
TimTam
It was a great story except for:
"Oh. Na, look seriously, this was a one-time thing wasn't it?"
"Of course it was, like I said before, what do you think I am? Anyway, you're going out with Hazel."
BOO! HISS!
The girls being best friends should have agreed to share him afterwards. I still gave you a five. But how can you be satisfied and okay with just a one night stand? From an emotional standpoint, that's such a huge disappointment. 5/5
A 5 from me. Great story. Wished it was longer but you write what you want. Ignore the idiot crying about lesbian sexual when the story description clearly shows what was going to happen
A very enjoyable story. The sex was hot and I know it wasn't going to stop. So another chapter would be nice.