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by beaverhunt

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Get your characters straight

Melissa is the girlfriend

Brenda is the sister

Timtom12Timtom12over 5 years ago
Interesting

But in dire need of an editor.

"I'll Brenda soon"?

And Melissa opened the door for Melissa?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
To anonymous

Apparently your too dumb to read. Melissa is his sister and brenda is the girlfriend. There are mistakes but this is made clear in first few paragraphs and does not change

spankfunforspankfunforover 5 years ago
Great Loving Story!

Your Story was well-written! I Enjoyed That Brenda was tied long enough to like ALL 3 of them getting together! Maybe Marriage and 2 separate babies? Loved This!

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