All Comments on 'Give Me the Man Pt. 11'

by Alex De Kok

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 2 months ago

Exciting conclusion!

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Campus77Campus77about 2 months ago

I have enjoyed this series very much. Great imagination in describing the battles and the lovers. The tech was fully explained and worked as needed. It ended as it began . . . in peace.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

The story was quite good overall but the end wasn't as exciting as expected based on the first few chapters.

I'm sure your health has something to do with that so it's no big deal.

The fact that you finished the story is more than enough.

I hope you keep writing. I occasionally re-read some of your stories like Mail Order Bride, Breakdown, Table and Bed (and others with that theme of offering table and bed to the guest).

Thank you very much for taking the time to write for your readers.

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July 13, 2023 - As some of you have no doubt realised, I'm writing again, albeit very slowly. My late wife was a writer as well, although not on Literotica, and I think she would have wanted me to continue. May 24, 2021 - I haven't posted anything for some time now, and it ma...

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