by en_extase
Funny how you stumble on polished little gems without even looking for it :)
I was taken by surprise by your story, it's enchanting, innocent, and very sexy!
A big thanks for writing this, I'll be coming back for more :P
I enjoyed the story, and wanted more when I reached the end. A little more explanation of who and what she is, maybe more adventures, perhaps concluding with her meeting her match...
you really pulled me into the world you created in this one
a man that gives all he has to pleasure his LADY. hard to find in a REAL MAN. I KNOW this for a FACT! thank you for the story. makes me feel good inside. JULIA
Hey, since this man was a great man who actually wanted to pleasure his female partner and he might have be the bread winner for his family and a great father, maybe she should have spared him and just erase his memory. Instead when she needs to feed on someone to survive, she should instead choose a gang leader, a drug lord or a person who is terrorizing persons where they live and that if they suddenly disappear, everyone will be glad that they are gone.