by Boxlicker101
This could've been a great sex story, but you made the observation early on that Tory didn't want to risk AIDs through unprotected sex. So what did she do, swallow his semen????? Come on boxlicker, you need to go back to 4th grade sex ed and make sure you know how to avoid STDs. Remember too that this is a fantasy site, your characters can have unprotected sex if you want them to...don't contradict your characters through glaring inconsistencies.
The sexual encounter was well written. Just try and proof read a little better next time. It happens to the best of them