by TE999
I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Lets see it. This is great. Keep em coming!
you change the names of the characters all the time......Nic became Keri and Veronica became Virginia
Another fine chapter but you changed Veronica's name to Virginia at the bottom of Page 1. Again, you need to be a bit more descriptive of your characters. Looking forward to the next few chapters.
I'm just devouring every word like German chocolate cake. YUMMY YUM YUM.
Another name change from Veronica to Virginia. Otherwise, I liked her involvement with the other girl whose name was finally sorted out and the moms getting caught by the husband.