by TE999
Please, tell me what happen in chapter 7 I need to know. Don't leave me hanging the story is to good to stop. I love so please give me more.
I am just saying that after a while suspending disbelief becomes hard. The LoD hosting an orgy? Unlikely. Your heroines being grossed out by the orgy? I thought your ladies were open minded, liberal, lovers; not bigoted haters...
I enjoy this series but what is the deal that everytime the girls play, they always cum and then cum a second time, back to back. This isn't believable at all. Please stop doing this.
As it seems every conversation, interaction and encounter ends up with everyone having sex. Makes me want to skip to the parts where people are causing trouble for them. It's a lot more interesting.