All Comments on 'Going Out Ch. 02'

You're probably tired of me always babbling on and on, so I'll keep it short. :) Yay! Wonderful piece of work. Bravo, brava! Can't wait for the Cassie/John series and I hope to meet up with Chef sometime again ;). Oops there Im doing it again... Okay okay lol... Cat

It was great! I'm always pleased to find new stories from you, and they never disappoint. My only complaint is that I always want more!

an excellent piece, but then I expected no less. Ur stories always make me so hot.Cant wait to read more!!!!!!

The redhot juicy sex is very well described -- but they don't talk much at all, don't comment to each as to what they really like in making love, don't give nearly enough attention to knowing each other's personality and soul. We need more relational development; finding somebody to be cute and sexy isn't enough. There's a man there, not just a gorgeous cock and shapely butt. And the ending stinks. Still, the great sex sets the barn on fire.

Great short story.