by WordWizard55
Nice action good detail. You could visualize the outfits and what she was doing in the story. Thank you
Nice story. Short and Crisp - Still doesn't leave out the details required for imagining whats going on. Looking forward to more Lingerie sales.. :)
a good angle and great story go a long way, so what's keeping you from the sequel?
Well written, and really pleasurable readings. Just discovered your texts, read 3 ( unprepared sitter, unexpected storm and this one, the extra mile ).
I'll come back for the others.
I appreciate your style, the situations and the characters. I'm certainly not alone to do so. Thank you. Chuck.