All Comments on 'Gold Coast Pleasures Ch. 02'

I must say that I liked this second chapter better than your first. Especially because of the lead up. I can't wait for Chapter 3.

This is (or will be) a 7 part story, that's already written.

But I'm still fine-tuning the chapters; adding here and there; finding errors occasionally and generally tinkering with the words so I'm still not ready to dump the whole story on you yet. Instead I'm aiming at offering each chapter at perhaps 3 day intervals.

It isn't a story full of weirdness and strange activity - merely good old plain incest, but hopefully you'll find enough stimulation within my words to stir your senses!

So please hang on and enjoy it as much as I've enjoyed writing it.

Great second chapter. Can't wait for more, I am really enjoying this story.

sexy story. 5 stars. cant wait to read the next chapter!

Kim, Chad, Kim, Chad, he, she. That's mostly what I kept reading. Quite retarded way to write mother-son incest erotica with hardly any reference to their familial bond sing phrases like his mother or her son.