All Comments on 'Golden Birthday Ch. 01'

Wonderful ... thank you so much

to be very very kinky :)

Two of my favorite kinks, piss and incest, woven together in a beautiful tale.

Would love to know more about the backstory and how Becky found out about dad’s taste in porn.

Well done!

...erupt. MMMMM as someone else said here, 2 of my favorite things! Should wipe the keybaord off now,,, Over the years I've had some pee play but not in a long time now (with someone else)...SURE DO MISS IT!

never tried either but want to now at least one of them

More please.

Great story, not a drawn out build up either. I've always wanted to try piss play, now I definitely have to. The problem is, finding a willing partner.

Pissing and getting pissed on is gross and stupid.

For its contents. But the repetitions of things stated just one or two sentences before, the typos and the like... was a bit annoying. Should have someone read proof, then it will probably make a good story.

Incest and piss - music to my ears. Can’t wait to read more.