All Comments on 'Gone To Seed'

Really interesting. It does feel as if you swallowed the thesaurus before writing it?

"maudlin montage of remembrance" what a statement!

Thanks!

It's a lot... Or as the kids say "issa lot" but in the VERY best ways! I reread it twice to savor how the word play made me think feel smile definitely sending this one to the wife.

Well written, an intense and captivating read.

I had hope with the opening but then they came. Short, choppy phrases. Words. Word pairs or even isolated words. Slightly longer phrases that approximate but aren't quite sentences that try to assemble the word salad into something meaningful.

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Those can be good and very effective in small doses but when used in excess like in the beginning of this story and as illustrated in the paragraph above, they can lead the reader to move on to something else. Sadly, that's what happened here with me; I didn't finish reading it so I won't vote