All Comments on 'Good Karma'

This could possibly have been a nice "Romance" story, however "Good Karma" was so jumbled and haphazard in its presentation, that I lost concentration before page 01 ended.

I rated the story a 2*Star, which really needs to be rewritten.

Its nice to see that honesty pays off for Gwen.

Although Crystal let down Gwen a bit towards the end I'm sure Gwen would enjoy Crystal making it up to her

I sympathise with Gwen and her insecurities and she is a thoroughly likeable character who narrates the story at a good pace. A nice erotic fantasy section and intimate scene to complete the romance

A nice tribute to a wonderful singer at the end as well.

Thank you Smokey for a great story, very enjoyable

Jc

... where it's the personality of the first-person narrator that's so compelling. I couldn't put it down even to get busy with myself ... much. In short: ~~ squeeee ~~

I do hope we'll hear more from Gwenny in the (near?) future. Although Crystal's POV might be equally interesting. Going to explore the rest of your work now.

Though this has me puzzled: "And I'll turn the TV on low so we can chat." What does that even mean?

Tangent: If her mom had Huntington's, and she's her biological daughter, she has a 50% chance of getting the gene. If she has the gene, she has the disease and will, 100%, develop symptoms. It's an awful disease, and a strange thing for a young adult to gloss over.

More relevant: the described paper is unethical and would not be a college assignment.